Secrets Told
BibiLove
November 5th, 2024
Just one more second
One more moment
How much longer?
Not enough
Not one bit
Yuurrrr
BastionKnight
November 5th, 2024
@BibiLove
I liked this piece; the shortening syllabic structure really did well to convey a sense of time running out. Look forward to seeing more of your poems.