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Poetry on lost love

User Profile: tani2004
tani2004 August 8th, 2023

We were in love

Obsessively

Incessantly

Too much Too deep

But,

You met a girl,

And soon, I'd find myself into nervous breakdowns

It is maddening how i still love you,

To the point of suffocation

To the moon and never back.

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User Profile: Cookiedonuts2000
Cookiedonuts2000 August 8th, 2023

@tani2004

This is so well written! Even with the usage of few words you've managed to convey the emotions of someone going through a heartbreak so well💙

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User Profile: LoveMyMoonflowers
LoveMyMoonflowers August 8th, 2023

@Cookiedonuts2000

Agreed! <3

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