OUR ORIGINAL POETRY: Share It Here
Hello there everyone!
If you're reading this it means that you probably are quite fond of poetry and writing it to. This is a thread to post all and any poetry that you may have, be it happy, sad, angry or just silly. All styles are welcome (free verse, couplets, slam) and it would be great to have at least one poem up a day for all of us to enjoy together!!
Angel's song
Somewhere in the distance, I hear soft tunes
a song of hope in this world that is hellbound
Join me on this marvelous musical adventure
travel with me to the inner depths of sound
Sometimes the earth cries for her children
as melancholy spreads its dark wings
Yet this is not like anything I've heard before
this song is one that the angel brings
Somehow we must find the place it's hidden
and we should be careful not to make a wrong
Me and my friends, we leave silently
to find whoever is playing this wonder song
Someone sensed our approach and disappeared
at the same time the music stopped playing
Desperately I look to my friend for answers
'hope is dead' is all I remember him saying
Poem I wrote a couple of years ago.
Run away
You were far too perfect for me to believe
that someone so lovely could have been in so much pain
But you curl up inside of your messed up mind
Wishing you could sleep away the days
until the end of time
You've bled out these words
it's a sound that no ones heard
You've screamed out their names
But they're too busy for you pain.
So inside here you lie
and you are too far to hear me sing
but maybe you'll hear these ___ words if
I just stand and scream
Maybe you could vanish now
Become a ghost inside the crowd
No more nightmares that hunt you down
Their screaming silence mutes the sound
Maybe you could scream in fear
Scare away the ones who pretend to care
Maybe we could just rot tonight
Add a numbness to the bite
Maybe you could run away
Is there any other way?
Maybe we could run away
Tell me dear
What do you say?
-A.D.L
(redaction by forum mentor annie)
Today I woke up
And I had almost forgotten you were gone.
I almost sent you a text as if nothing was wrong.
It was so strange how your name came up as if nothing had changed.
Its so weird how it feels, as if everything's the same.
The music still plays.
There is still rainbows after rain.
Even though I lost you that day
the children still play.
You'd think they would have stopped
But to them nothing has changed.
You see the sun stops for no one.
When you're gone don't expect rain.
The world stops for nothing,
It'll spin on just the same.
Although it feels like you left only yesterday
Everything inside me has torn away
But the hundreds who never even knew your name,
To them it's just another day.
-A.D.L
TRIGGER WARNING: SUICIDE
Another Statistic
I'll just be another statistic.
Another lost soul that didn't make it.
An empty cause that could no longer take it.
A hollow heart that was done with faking.
I'm a number that adds up to a whole lot of nothing.
A body full of scars to remind me I'm something.
Screaming in writing as if they'll hear me.
Trying to drain these tears
And find a meaning.
Will you even remember me when my breath ceases to exist?
Or will myself be represented by a number to all of these masses.
I don't really wanna die but this pain still persists.
And all I can help is wonder
Will I be missed?
Or will I just become another number added to the list.
-A.D.L
@TaintedHaze THIS IS SO GOOD IM OBSESSED W IT
@superficialteen
Aw thank you so much~! I wrote this poem years ago. If you're interested in my writing and would like to see more I have a growing collection of my poems on ___ . Totally up to you but it's here if you are interesting~ Thank you so much for the compliment. It feels really nice when people connect with my poetry because in a way they are connecting with me and the feelings I've had.
(edited to remove contact information, by forum mentor annie)
@TaintedHaze
This is legitimately incredible. Major credit for turning so much pain into something so beautiful and expressive.
WORLD WAR III
In World War I, the blacks could not fight in the war
A white kiling a black would be going too far
In World War II, the perfect race was being made
However, the perfect race was never created, nations making the dream fade
In World War III, we faced an eclipse that we barely wished to witness
The colour of our skin determined our richness
Where what the eye sees mattered more than what the heart saw-- feelings resisted
The past is not the only place where racism existed
Look at me and tell me what you see
I am black with a heart of gold... silver, whatever, but tell me
Why does it matter that I am colour?
Racism hasn't erased me, my heart still beats and is filled with valour
Racism is the enemy, Pierre Berton said
It deserves to be met head on and stomped out until it is dead
But how can we stomp it out
When racism is the ghost with a deafening silence and a shieking shout?
Let me fight this war again
Let all my black brothers and sisters walk the streets, these young men
Constantly looking over their shoulder, not ready to be another name
Another Trayvon, another Michael, another Eric Garner playing an unfair death game
Us blacks are treated as problems rather than people
A disgusting sickness in which others find lethal
They bleach the parts of me that make them uncomfortable
Disinfecting parts of me that become undiscoverable
There is a war in our hearts
Our weapons are not guns, tanks, and metal parts
But they are love, compassion, empathy, hope, cooperation
Until someday we will move forward, all in liberation
Let me and every black man and woman out there be free
Be able to say "Last night, I safely walked the street
Without being drowned in discrimination, where morals lack"
Let us be able to say without fear: "I AM PROUD TO BE BLACK!"
Don't write her a poem that shall rhyme,
free yourself from that suffocating paradigm,
let the words trip over each other,
stumble, tumble and grumble,
as you fumble to find the right words,
words to describe a person that's constantly on the run,
trying to evade misunderstandings and misrepresentations,
boxes and cages of other's perceptions,
in the end falling prey,
to the voices in her own head,
the very thoughts that refused to surrender,
to admit defeat,
that protested against everything and refused to be silenced,
yet there it was- ,
defeat,
anything BUT discreet,
announcing it's presence not with a sigh,
but rather a cry that ripped the silence,
punctuated it all,
the pain, the agony, the misery,
there was no more escaping it,
denying it,
eluding it,
and as it shattered every illusion that still existed,
it broke her down,
almost like a fraction merely in need of simplification,
oh but boy,
it was so much more…
it was the release and emergence of a butterfly,
it had shaped her, defined her,
all that time,
spent crumbling and evolving,
wrapped in the comforts of the chrysalis,
she was finally free,
the first fracture had been the beginning after all,
but not of a downfall,
rather the beginning of the beginning of it all,
whatever "all" entailed,
was yet to be uncovered though...
~ Sky
@skyisblue awesome!
@heartfulMusic18 thanks for reading :) I really appreciate it :)
@skyisblue, this poem is really good! It tells an important story--I can relate. I like how the person grows out of the cocoon.
@BraveSpirit Thank you so much for taking the time to read it :) I'm glad its meaning resonated with you :)
@skyisblue
do you want to discuss this poem in the poetry writing group?
Tranquil peace
At the end of the world I stand
I remain one of the surviving few
With this bloody map still in my hand
from here I have an eagle's view
Supposedly, this should be the place
where my loved ones found shelter
I realise, there is absolutely no trace
if she had been here, I'd have felt her
Despair surrounds my very being
desperate cries reach my hurting ears
Yet death is all that I'm seeing
stop I say, no time for useless fears
My bones are tired from this journey
to find the ones I care for, I resisted
The urge to give up and beg for mercy
to a god that is inexplicably twisted
The so called 'point of no return'
sounds so awfully final, like a surrender
But I must admit, for the end I yearn
a tranquil peace, so beautifully tender
@Cheeney Once again I am amazed :D
I can't even explain why but I adore these types of peoms from you.
Thank you for these awesome adventurous peoms ^^
@FaithForTheWin I'm glad you like them
Thank you so much!
You're the type of girl they write love songs about.
The type with a pretty face and a soft voice that make people weak at their knees
The most beautiful girl
You could rule the world with a smile.
You're the type of girl they write breakup songs about
The type to make someone's blood run cold
Their bottom lips tremble as they can only
whisper 'why?' to you as you leave them with no remorse
You're that type of girl.
@May0204, this poem is wonderful. I love the language and rhythm, which create an interesting tone. And the reference about love songs followed by breaking-up songs has an impact. And the phrase "whisper Why to you" sounds lovely but is chilling. The whole thing is marvelous. And most of us have known "that type of girl."
@May0204
do you want to discuss this poem in the poetry writing group?
I'm tired of pretending
I'm tired of saying
I'm tired of acting
that I'm okay.
I'm tired of living
I'm tired of seeing
I'm tired of telling
the same old lie.
When will someone
save me?
@TheLypophreniaOfAPlantBlogger, the rhythm patterns is so cool. The repetition of the "I" statements followed by the abrupt switch. And then the pattern repeats. And the content -- it's heart-wrenching. Haven't we all at some point wanted for someone to save us?
When I look back, I fault the old fairy tales. A charming prince or a kind fairy always saved the nice, virtuous girl! Now I know that I am the one who must have strength and create my own magic. Nonetheless, your poem still touched a deep chord.
In springtime, when the flowers bloom,
In summer, with its joy and cheer,
In autumn, ‘neath the harvest moon,
Remember me, my dear.
In springtime, trees stand grand and tall.
In summer, bluebirds sing.
In autumn, leaves begin to fall.
Remember me, darling.
And one day, I shall reminisce,
When the leaves are young and new,
Ill think of you, and I shall wish
That I were beside you.
-Lucas D.
@ParanoidPoet Nice love poem. I really like how you included the seasons.
@FaithForTheWin Thanks. I really appreciate it.
@ParanoidPoet, this is really good -- I especially love the final stanza. The young, new leaves -- in contrast to the old love ... beautiful.
Your poem reminded me of a poem I wrote years ago in a poetry class--it took me a while to dig it out. As I recall, the challenge was to focus on the seasons. This was my effort:
Summer Idyll
When yellow leaves drift
Across slanting light
And songbirds flee
To the warm south,
I'll remember.
And on wintry nights
When crystal snows
Glisten across moonlight
And frozen branches
Whisper in the wind,
I'll remember.
But when warm earth
Welcomes violets and
Green buds swell
To scarlet,
I shall forget.
Ill forget the golden days
When we picked blueberries
And spoke of love
Under an August moon.
As you can see, I tried to exceed the assignment by including all the colors of the rainbow.
@Annie Nice poem! And thank you for your kind words.
@ParanoidPoet This send chills down my spine. It's so beautiful and light, yet has a touch of sadness. I love this.
@Andyken Thank you.