OUR ORIGINAL POETRY: Share It Here
Hello there everyone!
If you're reading this it means that you probably are quite fond of poetry and writing it to. This is a thread to post all and any poetry that you may have, be it happy, sad, angry or just silly. All styles are welcome (free verse, couplets, slam) and it would be great to have at least one poem up a day for all of us to enjoy together!!
SILLY LITTLE JOKER:
Silly little joker spending his days fooling around.
That's all it is right? Fooling around.
Silly little joker screaming up and down.
Inside it feels like he's screaming with no sound.
Silly little joker waves without a dent.
To him it feels like it's paralysed movement.
Silly little joker stands tall on his own.
But did you ever think it's because he feels all alone?
Silly little joker is at war with distant relations.
How could one face such draconian creations?
Silly little joker is juxtaposed from society.
Since when did it feel like the foreign custom was actually humanity ?
Such negativity.Wiped of all ability.Losing his sanity. Love being an abnormality!
He's just a silly little joker.
@izza I absolutely love this. I think I read it like 4-5 times by now and every time I love it more and more. Nice work italian!!
Aayy my Italian buddy likes my writing . Squad goals mastered 😎 @Nina007
@izza, izza, izza. All this time I've known you and admired you, and I didn't know what a fine poet you are! I remember commenting once on your mature prose, that I was surprised when I tried to send you a message and couldn't because you're on the teen side of the website.
And now I discover that your writing talents are wonderfully diverse. Wowwww.
@Annie *waves* hi! I'm so surprised that you think I'm mature haha that's really sweet , thank you! Hope your new job is going well!!
Fast forward
You didn?t love me the way you should.
I didn?t do anything to make it good.
You made me not care at all,
I stopped feeling so down.
You were like fire, I was like gasoline,
Making us both forget how it should feel.
I knew we were meant to break,
But surprisingly it didn?t make my heart ache.
You made me feel alive,
Made me light up inside.
You were my getaway,
You could just say the word and I?d let you lead the way.
Isn?t it funny that that?s all it takes,
To make my free will break.
But that didn?t worry me at all,
Because I knew we were meant to fall.
And even though it left us shattered,
It didn?t really matter,
Because for the first time, we had a power of a wildfire.
ItsJustMeKitty, The strong feelings in this poem come through really well. You've painted a picture of love and loss that is very real.
Writing to Emily
Em Dickinson -- that lucky girl
Could stay inside her room.
She wore nothing but black and white
To balance -- I assume --
The chaos of the world outside
With attic cleanliness --
Though what with all the poems she wrote,
There must have been some mess.
Em Dickinson -- that lucky girl --
I wish that I were she.
We have an attic too, you know --
And I write poetry --
And if our attic had a lock --
And if I could receive
My ink and food from stairs of wood --
I, too, would never leave.
Em Dickinson -- that lucky girl --
In walls she was set free --
She never saw the world, but saw
Things some would never see.
Her dashes -- inhalations -- where
Her -- passion -- caught -- its -- breath --
She wrote of moors -- of eyes -- of flies ---
But most of all -- of death.
Em Dickinson -- you lucky girl --
If you were not so dead
I'd tell you I would follow you
And keep writing in bed --
I'd rather be inside a room
Seen just by family --
Than sit here in this plastic chair
Writing to Emily.
Dear @harana,
This poem is extraordinary. It. . . speaks across time, and it makes my heart swell.
The technical merits are -- wow.
And who wouldn't smile at the idea of Em Dickinson, Lucky girl?
Thank you for bringing this poemhere for us to share.
Dear @harana,I really loved this poem! Good job!
Just to be completely clear, I'm waiting for more:D
Iwrite with not sins but tragedies
Not everyone can feel
They may not happen to most
And not everyone can deal
I've dealt with rape at a young age
Not to me but of a sibling
Since I was too young to be considered
It can be to me a blessing
Cruelty doesn't end here
I fear
But goes on and on for ages
With her I fear time doesn't end
But with that the time still gauges
As self concerned i have continued
With that I marked my own path
But even still
I cannot feel
And build inside my own wrath
Hating family for denying
What has already happened
I can't deny
Not defy
That which was families action
But still we've both grown
And maybe further apart
But none of us can deny
The malice in a grandfathers heart
And even with knowing
We both kept in growing
And distancing us both from the all
But even with that
Neither could hide
That both of us still
Built a wall
Wish I could edit it honestly.
@MsBop, it's a very moving poem. Thank youfor sharing it.
However, if you'd like to edit it, you have a couple choices: you can send me a message with the desired edits, and I can do them for you. Or I can delete the whole thing and you can re-post. (That's definitely easier.) Just let me know!
Plastic Ballerina by cre
Plastic ballerina
In your pink and plastic dress
I brought the world to you
and I confess
Never once did I consider
That perhaps in your plastic way
You preferred the closed-up night
To my bright and plastic day
Plastic ballerina
I watched you spinning round
In your pink and plastic tutu
To a tinkling tinny sound
I played that it was music
And assumed you liked it too
Although never once in all those years
Did I think to stop and ask you
Plastic ballerina
The days grew into years
And you collected dust
While I collected fears
You chipped away in pieces
And the notes dropped from your song
Save one that kept repeating
As you gamely tripped along
Plastic ballerina
In your pink and plastic box
I'll give you back the night now
And forever close the lock
Goodnight ballerina
This shall be our final glance
In your pink and plastic coffin
You'll be free to never dance.
This one's not mine but cre's -- one of my favorites.
In fact i am just ------ angry, at me, at the world, at everyone.
It's hard to denie that i really am done.
People talk a lot ,they probably never will understand this feeling.
Yes it's hard, no it isn't easy healing.
I want it, i need it, all the energy is going to fighting the knife.
You don't know how much i hate my life.
But i can't leave, not aloud to give up eventough i want it so bad.
I'm not far from turning totally mad.
This place is really cruel and only 1 truly seems to care, you see.
And that person isn't even ----ing me.
If you're suicidal your selfish and if you act happy they don't expect it.
I get so sick of this caprisious bull----.
The long ride isn't over, i still want to keep laying in my bed.
I will be okay but i'm not there yet.
Really want to believe in me but i'm so scared to just have faith.
have to fight now before it's too late.
expletive deleted by forum mentor Annie
@candyshht, This poem expresses strong anger and despair. And I think poetry can be a good way to release such strong emotions. However, if the process of writing and sharing does not release enough of the pain, I hope you'll contact one of our listeners at 7 Cups or other resources in your community, to help you feel better. I want you to be safe.
In memory of Maya Plisetskaya
The firebird-
Gold, fire and
Tempting light.
Her hands-wings
Reaching for the sun.
Cosmic fifth position
Relev
Feathers-
Golden vapor.
She fades away.
Dust and flare.
Shines, yet is no more.
I see her;
In my dreams,
In the sunlight,
In fire.
The ethereal bird
Flies above
Possibilities,
Above being.
At last, she is
Eternity.
@NataliaNectarine- The poem is as lovely as the dancer it describes.
I've been looking for a poetry outlet. And most can be very personal. I'd rather list somewhere I don't feel judged doing them. Here's another I wrote
She spoke so light
With levity
Without steadiness
Or constancy
Incoherent
Mute
Mum
Quite
Silent
Even dumb
And in those words she could not hear
The lies in heart she kept so dear
The part of her so filled with fear
That hold she grips so close, so near
It's lost in silence
And long forgotten
It grows with distance
But like a garden
It's hers to hold
Her burden to carry
In moments so bold
It's hers to bury
"Forgive and forget"
We've all been told
But who's to regret
When fingers grow cold.
@MsBop, This is so powerful! The rhythms develop a fast pace that adds to the emotion, and then it slows down at the end. Poignant.
Here's one I've been working on for a little bit. Hope you like.
Piccadilly Dream
Last night riding Piccadilly Line -
circus lions, trapeze artists, and bipolar clowns
cartwheeled between each cart. Clown paints
a smile over frown, and still juggled his organs
in stomach without dropping one.
Accountants and defense lawyers
picketing on platforms as each tunnel;
petitioning peace in Underground, and
I was in front car reading the picket signs on 5:00 pm train
with family members saying things
they normally never say, like
we should burn our savings to start our bum life
and
love we share does not rely on pents in pockets.
Ideas flowed out mouths like investments deposited in trust funds.
I sat next to my Uncle,
fourth row from the front,
where he told me he loved me
and meant it.
And I learned how to cry again -
how to dig my thoughts out from brain folds.
We sat on seats to watch clown bounce around in latex spandex,
while he internalized anger like digesting Angus Prime.
Brooklyn and Kimberly were married in back seats
by the pope himself. Aisle sprinkled with dandelion peddles
and the dance party woke up neighbor carts.
We danced away politics and economy
and conducted body heat as fuel for electricity.
Obama said thanks over evening meal, and
the Queen gave me the crown of jewels.
And I still keep it on until the morning light.
@Sam Rosen,
I really like and admire this. It paints a picture that makes me want to know more, keep reading. And it has a ring of truth. There is universality. For me, this one has . . . gravitas.
So far, it's my favorite of the poems you've posted.
@Sam Rosen,
I am stunned by the way you combined a rather modern metric scheme and languagewith a strong, opaque symbolism that reminds me of middle to laterMallarm
I can only say that you should keep doing what you do because it's working! :)
Perception
by: Monarda
"The world should be organized.
Everything should be categorized.
Nothing is out of
place,
and everything isclear."
That's what I thought it waslike.
It'sdifferent, though, andI can't understand why.
"The world is somessy,
and colorful
and spontaneous,
and unclear,
and judgmental.
and harsh,
and strange."
That's what I think now.
I don't know if it's true, though.
I'll find out sooner or later, okay?