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A midnight haiku

User Profile: Shayloveshugs
Shayloveshugs November 14th

Amidst the moonlight,

a moving shadow is tender,

and the darkness combusts

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User Profile: BastionKnight
BastionKnight November 14th

@Shayloveshugs

A very interesting poem with great imagery. I found it alluringly ambiguous, and the last line sounds so revelatory and yet causes so many questions. I liked it.

Hope to see more. 

User Profile: azurePond
azurePond November 14th

@Shayloveshugs Love this!  it’s like an emotional eruption, a hidden truth or feeling suddenly breaking free.