Poetry from The Giver

cinnamon4018
December 2nd, 2024
Feelings are fleeting. On the surface. But emotions are deep, primal they linger.
-The Giver

azurePond
December 3rd, 2024
@cinnamon4018 Great writing – it really packs a punch in just a few words!

wIthpeACE
December 7th, 2024
@cinnamon4018
Feelings are fleeting. On the surface. But emotions are deep, primal they linger.
The picture you paint for me is pretty. Its so vibrant and so clear.
Perhaps that's why I don't understand. Maybe 'cause I am the giver.
And since I come from deep down; underneath. It all mixed and entangled here...
[I am sorry. The words just flowed and I couldn't help but complete!!⋆˚✿˖° ]

lightforearth
December 7th, 2024
@cinnamon4018
Primal emotions trapped and masked.
The other me. Mirroring my shadows.
Lets receive what it is that we give.
- The receiver
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wIthpeACE
December 7th, 2024
@lightforearth
Amazingly related, Light! ദ്ദി ✧
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