My poetry…

I was gifted this beautiful rose
So bright and colourful
Watching it grow blissfully everyday.
The outer world sees growth and not much more.
But their hearts would shatter if they walked through our door.
All the time I spent trying to protect her.
I got none of the credit cause you see, this particular rose wasn’t under my name.
And while its owner was living in my once peaceful domain,
It turned into a thick dark cloud with their energy surrounding, she's profane.
But my rose was still growing.
At least she's growing.
She has some battle scars now, but i wouldn’t know how cuz the owner won't tell me.
I care about this rose so much yet I have so little control.
it's not fair.
I'm watching my beautiful rose slowly wither away, the owners doing too much harm.
I yell at the authorities to put this rose under someone else’s name or it's gonna lose its charm.
They say “what's the worst that can happen” maybe to keep themselves sane, but couldn't they see me and this rose were in pain.
I woke up one morning.
Seeing my beautiful rose lifeless, flowers unbloomed.
Maybe the authorities shouldn’t have assumed.

@onyxgirl
Great poem, thank you for sharing 🌸

@onyxgirl
What a poignant and heart-wrenching poem! Your use of the rose as a powerful metaphor for someone you care deeply about is beautifully expressed. The imagery of growth amidst struggle captures the complexity of love and the pain of feeling helpless in the face of harm. I love how you convey the frustration of wanting to protect your rose while grappling with the limitations imposed by others.
The contrast between the external perception of beauty and the internal struggle is striking, and your plea for understanding resonates deeply. This piece reflects a profound sense of empathy and concern, making it incredibly moving. Thank you for sharing such an emotional and thought-provoking work! 🌹💔✨🌧️