Burnt Toast (Poem)
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Bread, Right from the bag, had potential.
Receiving word that their life had been special.
Each bar set so high, to where bread could not reach,
Abandoned, bread was shoved in the toaster before their sentence was complete.
Damaged, Toast urged to keep up with the heat.
Battling with these goals that they simply could not meet.
Racing to finish, Toast just wanted to get this over with
Every goal the meet burning their crust
Accepting failure, Toast stopped trying
Dissatisfaction filling their mind, Self hatred began to arise.
Burnt Bread
Burnt Toast
Burnt Crumbs
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The title of your poem is quite the eye-catcher!
I don't believe I've ever seen this analogy! It's very unique! I love how you used bread as a way to get a message across. It is very impactful. Thanks for sharing with us💜
@innateJoy9602 Ahh! Thank you so much!! <:D
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@JonahDoesArt
Please continue to share your poems with us! I look forward to reading more! :)💜
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