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Burnt Toast (Poem)

User Profile: JonahDoesArt
JonahDoesArt November 5th, 2022

Bread, Right from the bag, had potential.

Receiving word that their life had been special.

Each bar set so high, to where bread could not reach,

Abandoned, bread was shoved in the toaster before their sentence was complete.

Damaged, Toast urged to keep up with the heat.

Battling with these goals that they simply could not meet.

Racing to finish, Toast just wanted to get this over with

Every goal the meet burning their crust

Accepting failure, Toast stopped trying

Dissatisfaction filling their mind, Self hatred began to arise.

Burnt Bread

Burnt Toast

Burnt Crumbs

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User Profile: innateJoy9602
innateJoy9602 November 6th, 2022

@JonahDoesArt

The title of your poem is quite the eye-catcher!

I don't believe I've ever seen this analogy! It's very unique! I love how you used bread as a way to get a message across. It is very impactful. Thanks for sharing with us💜

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User Profile: JonahDoesArt
JonahDoesArt OP November 6th, 2022

@innateJoy9602 Ahh! Thank you so much!! <:D

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User Profile: innateJoy9602
innateJoy9602 November 6th, 2022

@JonahDoesArt

Please continue to share your poems with us! I look forward to reading more! :)💜

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User Profile: magneticShoulder3193
magneticShoulder3193 November 6th, 2022

@JonahDoesArt

Such a great poem, thanks for sharing!

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User Profile: JonahDoesArt
JonahDoesArt OP November 6th, 2022

@magneticShoulder3193

Thank you! <:)

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